for When a Rose Blooms in December2/23/2007 c20 Amanda
This is my whole spin in how it seems to look to me with the whole Braden thing. You keep having his character say he is "different". He was pressuring Norah to have sex or whatever with him. And he lied when he said he loved her. He never has quite said why he is different at least from how I understand the story. I think the big thing is that he is gay. He was using Norah as his one last chance to see if he really was interested in girls, and that is why he was pressuring Norah for sex. Makes sense to me. Maybe I'm taking this story line way out of context. I love what you are doing though. This story is awesome. i love Dante and Norah. I want to see them kiss!
This is my whole spin in how it seems to look to me with the whole Braden thing. You keep having his character say he is "different". He was pressuring Norah to have sex or whatever with him. And he lied when he said he loved her. He never has quite said why he is different at least from how I understand the story. I think the big thing is that he is gay. He was using Norah as his one last chance to see if he really was interested in girls, and that is why he was pressuring Norah for sex. Makes sense to me. Maybe I'm taking this story line way out of context. I love what you are doing though. This story is awesome. i love Dante and Norah. I want to see them kiss!
2/23/2007 c20 
4morganelena
Okay, I have only come to one conclusion on Braden's differentness. ( If that is even a word. Most likely not. :P )
A. He is gay.
B. He has just...changed. Personality-wise.
C. He is gay.
I'm leaning more towards that he is gay. Heh. Maybe he told Norah that he loved her to see if HE would feel anything for her. Maybe that's why he was trying to get her to sleep with him. I'm not sure. He doesn't SEEM gay. He doesn't have any girlish type qualities. Unless he's in denial.
Oh my god, what if he's in love with Dante? Hahaha, now THAT would make an interesting story. Wow. Very strange visual... Heh.
Anyways! Enough about Braden! Let's talk about DANTE! I love Dante. :) Haha, as expected. I wish there was more Norah-Dante in this chapter, just because. I love them together. And I love love love all of the internal conflict going on. I really felt Dante's jealousy in this chapter. It was a really emotional chapter, this one. :)
I feel like I KNOW your characters. Is that weird? I hope not. Haha, it just seems like I know their personalities and what they might do in a situation and how they might react. ...I guess I just really like this story. :D
That's a good sign, though!
Keep writing! :)
4morganelenaOkay, I have only come to one conclusion on Braden's differentness. ( If that is even a word. Most likely not. :P )
A. He is gay.
B. He has just...changed. Personality-wise.
C. He is gay.
I'm leaning more towards that he is gay. Heh. Maybe he told Norah that he loved her to see if HE would feel anything for her. Maybe that's why he was trying to get her to sleep with him. I'm not sure. He doesn't SEEM gay. He doesn't have any girlish type qualities. Unless he's in denial.
Oh my god, what if he's in love with Dante? Hahaha, now THAT would make an interesting story. Wow. Very strange visual... Heh.
Anyways! Enough about Braden! Let's talk about DANTE! I love Dante. :) Haha, as expected. I wish there was more Norah-Dante in this chapter, just because. I love them together. And I love love love all of the internal conflict going on. I really felt Dante's jealousy in this chapter. It was a really emotional chapter, this one. :)
I feel like I KNOW your characters. Is that weird? I hope not. Haha, it just seems like I know their personalities and what they might do in a situation and how they might react. ...I guess I just really like this story. :D
That's a good sign, though!
Keep writing! :)
2/23/2007 c20 49Endowment's Seraph
he's gay! ain't he! Braden of course is who I'm referring to. I'm dying to read more! please! write more soon!
~Mel
49Endowment's Seraphhe's gay! ain't he! Braden of course is who I'm referring to. I'm dying to read more! please! write more soon!
~Mel
2/23/2007 c20 greenfoundation
Darned Braden...Yeah, how could he do that to his best friend!
Woo he admits he lubs her!
And why wont Dante just SAY it!
*eye twitch* gr ... These things distress me. Hehe.
Stunned ... The word ... Its ... Powerful.
I really dont like ella!
No offense taken by the way ... I didn't know what the offesnse was about ... Anywho...
Byebye! That was a weird review, sorry, heheh, if it confuses you ... sorry ...
Darned Braden...Yeah, how could he do that to his best friend!
Woo he admits he lubs her!
And why wont Dante just SAY it!
*eye twitch* gr ... These things distress me. Hehe.
Stunned ... The word ... Its ... Powerful.
I really dont like ella!
No offense taken by the way ... I didn't know what the offesnse was about ... Anywho...
Byebye! That was a weird review, sorry, heheh, if it confuses you ... sorry ...
2/23/2007 c20 25tornangelwings
hey girlie, i know its been a long time huh. well good luck with your french test. *cheers for you* anywho back to business, i REALLY like this chapter, i think i know whats going on with braden *whispers to you ("he's gay")* all well i just hope dante gets norah in the end, he's so in love withe her.
25tornangelwingshey girlie, i know its been a long time huh. well good luck with your french test. *cheers for you* anywho back to business, i REALLY like this chapter, i think i know whats going on with braden *whispers to you ("he's gay")* all well i just hope dante gets norah in the end, he's so in love withe her.
2/23/2007 c20 False-Facade
Omg I don't know u but I'm going 2 kil u I love ur story so much and I'm so glad u updated because I was gona kil myself if u didint I love this story so much keep it up plsplsplspl update soon plss
Omg I don't know u but I'm going 2 kil u I love ur story so much and I'm so glad u updated because I was gona kil myself if u didint I love this story so much keep it up plsplsplspl update soon plss
2/23/2007 c20 sanzo-reload
What? Braden lied about those 'I Love You' stuff? How the hell can he do that? Urghh.. I'm so angry with him right now.. Anyway, I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter..
Keep writing~
What? Braden lied about those 'I Love You' stuff? How the hell can he do that? Urghh.. I'm so angry with him right now.. Anyway, I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter..
Keep writing~
2/23/2007 c20 1Gwyn Baranof
Damn, you surprise me every time. How do you do this? It is driving my crazy, yet I love it. I do not think that I can say that enough.
Yeah, I've really got nothing to say. Like normal. Sorry.
1Gwyn BaranofDamn, you surprise me every time. How do you do this? It is driving my crazy, yet I love it. I do not think that I can say that enough.
Yeah, I've really got nothing to say. Like normal. Sorry.
2/23/2007 c20 not important
GAH!
UPDATE ASAP!
i`ll die not knowing what happens! LOL
GAH!
UPDATE ASAP!
i`ll die not knowing what happens! LOL
2/22/2007 c19 not-here-right-now
I love your stories, their so cool and the plot is amazing. Anyways Im waiting impatiently for whats gonna happenedin the next chapter, plz hurry!.
I love your stories, their so cool and the plot is amazing. Anyways Im waiting impatiently for whats gonna happenedin the next chapter, plz hurry!.
2/18/2007 c19 iLoveFiction
OMG! he said "i love you"! i like braden he seems so sweet i wouldn't mind if she stayed with him. don't get me wrong i like dante too.i love this story! i stayed up 4 in the mornig finishing it! PLEASE update soon!
OMG! he said "i love you"! i like braden he seems so sweet i wouldn't mind if she stayed with him. don't get me wrong i like dante too.i love this story! i stayed up 4 in the mornig finishing it! PLEASE update soon!
2/12/2007 c19 1turqoiseinstant
shootin to break 300 mark any day now. i still love the way this story is playing out, and the plot is still moving really well. you definetly keep the reader on their toes. i will not lie to you however...i have been resting on my heels for the past few days just daydreaming of dante, norah, and braden. i hope you move to change that soon...aka eagerly waiting an update! much love-
turquoise
1turqoiseinstantshootin to break 300 mark any day now. i still love the way this story is playing out, and the plot is still moving really well. you definetly keep the reader on their toes. i will not lie to you however...i have been resting on my heels for the past few days just daydreaming of dante, norah, and braden. i hope you move to change that soon...aka eagerly waiting an update! much love-
turquoise
2/10/2007 c19 sanzo-reload
OMG, he said I love you! No.. Please don't tell me that Norah will change her mind after this.. Please... Anyway, can't wait to read more..
KEEP UPDATING!
OMG, he said I love you! No.. Please don't tell me that Norah will change her mind after this.. Please... Anyway, can't wait to read more..
KEEP UPDATING!
2/10/2007 c19 hellokittygirl
You're amazing. I am ... so shocked. Terribly shocked. Oh my goodness. I thought Braden was going to break up with her, but then he's all, 'I LOVE YOU'? What the HELL? Where the fuck is DANTE? AH! I love the guy. So sue me. I so badly want to see them together. I'm going to cry.
Update soon?
-Lqd
You're amazing. I am ... so shocked. Terribly shocked. Oh my goodness. I thought Braden was going to break up with her, but then he's all, 'I LOVE YOU'? What the HELL? Where the fuck is DANTE? AH! I love the guy. So sue me. I so badly want to see them together. I'm going to cry.
Update soon?
-Lqd