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8writerwithoutacause
cute! i found the balcony thing, a little corny but im not norah the hopeless romantic, so i liked it, for her. i think this claire character could definetly be interesting despite her utter randomess.
oh are you gonna pair her up with one of the male characters?
sorry i always insinutate things, haha, anyways yeah the title doesn't make much sense.
hm titles, titles...
how bout soft surrender(its a killers song) cause there giving into there love/hate relationship and cause she's giving into her romantic tendancies with Bradin?
8writerwithoutacausecute! i found the balcony thing, a little corny but im not norah the hopeless romantic, so i liked it, for her. i think this claire character could definetly be interesting despite her utter randomess.
oh are you gonna pair her up with one of the male characters?
sorry i always insinutate things, haha, anyways yeah the title doesn't make much sense.
hm titles, titles...
how bout soft surrender(its a killers song) cause there giving into there love/hate relationship and cause she's giving into her romantic tendancies with Bradin?
11/4/2006 c7 1Gwyn Baranof
I was sad there was no Dante, but, hey, it is not my story. Umm...I did not see the point to the whole Claire thing, but I am sure I will.
The whole just Norah and Dante point of view thing seems to be working so far. There is not any reason(as of yet) to have other point of views.
The title is different. I like that. I do not see how it has to do with anything of this story, but I also do not have any ideas. Oh, well.
1Gwyn BaranofI was sad there was no Dante, but, hey, it is not my story. Umm...I did not see the point to the whole Claire thing, but I am sure I will.
The whole just Norah and Dante point of view thing seems to be working so far. There is not any reason(as of yet) to have other point of views.
The title is different. I like that. I do not see how it has to do with anything of this story, but I also do not have any ideas. Oh, well.
11/2/2006 c6 1Mae Serenity
this is an awesome story. i didn't want to review until i got through all what you have so far. i like it. i was kindof hoping for dante too. oh well
1Mae Serenitythis is an awesome story. i didn't want to review until i got through all what you have so far. i like it. i was kindof hoping for dante too. oh well
11/2/2006 c6 34give me back my childhood
I think it's going just at the right pace. (: aww, I was kind of rooting for Dante because Braden seemed pretty wussy. haha getting moody over a girl? not cool. (: but overall, the story's pretty interesting. can't wait to see what happens next! (:
34give me back my childhoodI think it's going just at the right pace. (: aww, I was kind of rooting for Dante because Braden seemed pretty wussy. haha getting moody over a girl? not cool. (: but overall, the story's pretty interesting. can't wait to see what happens next! (:
11/1/2006 c6 orangecandyy
yay! Dante POV chapter! We I really like it! And I don't think it's too fast. I think it's just right since stories that drag out forever are kinda boring...Anyways, good job! Can't wait for the next chapter too!
yay! Dante POV chapter! We I really like it! And I don't think it's too fast. I think it's just right since stories that drag out forever are kinda boring...Anyways, good job! Can't wait for the next chapter too!
11/1/2006 c6 LuthienBlack
Okay, so I just read all of the story in one sitting, and I admit I am a little wary. I mean Braden and Norah seem awesome together, but I have gathered that Dante is the second main character. What are you going to do that will break Braden and Norah a part? Why can't they just be happy? (my tone is melodramatic...please don't mistake it for manic). Good story!
Okay, so I just read all of the story in one sitting, and I admit I am a little wary. I mean Braden and Norah seem awesome together, but I have gathered that Dante is the second main character. What are you going to do that will break Braden and Norah a part? Why can't they just be happy? (my tone is melodramatic...please don't mistake it for manic). Good story!
11/1/2006 c6 wittynamehere
o! did I notice a twinge of jelousy on dante's part? who cares-they kissed~yes!~ keep up the good work and update soon!
walking disaster
o! did I notice a twinge of jelousy on dante's part? who cares-they kissed~yes!~ keep up the good work and update soon!
walking disaster
11/1/2006 c6 just4me
hey this a greats story... i truthfully dont think taht you are going at a fast pace bec i hate it when things take 100 years but this is good bec its not going too fast yert its not going too slow. wtvr i just want to say its great and that i hope you update soon
hey this a greats story... i truthfully dont think taht you are going at a fast pace bec i hate it when things take 100 years but this is good bec its not going too fast yert its not going too slow. wtvr i just want to say its great and that i hope you update soon
11/1/2006 c1 8writerwithoutacause
much better with pacing, (it won't let me review again) i'm still a little iffy about dante watching them makeout but i understand, if it were to be in the story he would need to see it. have you ever thought about writing bradin?
8writerwithoutacausemuch better with pacing, (it won't let me review again) i'm still a little iffy about dante watching them makeout but i understand, if it were to be in the story he would need to see it. have you ever thought about writing bradin?
11/1/2006 c6 Your Passion
The pace is normal, but make sure to hid all Dante feelings for now. It might ruin it if you don't. Besides that I really like it and I think I have a feeling about what is going to happen next!
Update soon please!
~JAM
The pace is normal, but make sure to hid all Dante feelings for now. It might ruin it if you don't. Besides that I really like it and I think I have a feeling about what is going to happen next!
Update soon please!
~JAM
10/31/2006 c6 alicia
that was reali good but yeah i think it was a little fast paced i recommend that he dosent show any sort of affection till just a bit later on but anywho im realii glad u updated keep it up
that was reali good but yeah i think it was a little fast paced i recommend that he dosent show any sort of affection till just a bit later on but anywho im realii glad u updated keep it up
10/31/2006 c6 17angels and effects
Hoho, finally some action huh? I really think Braden's so cute, all hesistant to ask Norah out and all. Hey, it's hard to change who you are... not being a playboy is good though, so I can't complain. Hmm, and Dante's feelings? A little obvious... all that denying actually makes it all the more obvious. After, there's a fine line between hate and love. Maybe something will happen during tutoring, haha... with Dante's feelings developing like that, the tutoring sessions should be rather interesting. And Braden's his best friend. Hmm.
Update soon! I want to know how Dante's going to deal with it! And whether he's going to realise what he's feeling at all... hahx, great chapter again :)
17angels and effectsHoho, finally some action huh? I really think Braden's so cute, all hesistant to ask Norah out and all. Hey, it's hard to change who you are... not being a playboy is good though, so I can't complain. Hmm, and Dante's feelings? A little obvious... all that denying actually makes it all the more obvious. After, there's a fine line between hate and love. Maybe something will happen during tutoring, haha... with Dante's feelings developing like that, the tutoring sessions should be rather interesting. And Braden's his best friend. Hmm.
Update soon! I want to know how Dante's going to deal with it! And whether he's going to realise what he's feeling at all... hahx, great chapter again :)
10/31/2006 c6 callmecute
aw he likes her
aw he likes her