12/17/2007 c14 6Elizabeth D-hopeless romantic
urg *growl* stupid ella and posse of 'like, oh my god' friends
urg *growl* stupid ella and posse of 'like, oh my god' friends
12/16/2007 c24 sanzo-reload
I'm so sorry! I seriously didn't realize that the last chapter was upped a month ago! I suck so much as your avid reader!
Anyway, I like the last chapter. The last scene is awfully cute! Love it...
But why do you want to rewrite the story again?
Oh, your relatives live in Malaysia? I'm from Malaysia too.. Where do your relative live in M'sia btw?
I'm so sorry! I seriously didn't realize that the last chapter was upped a month ago! I suck so much as your avid reader!
Anyway, I like the last chapter. The last scene is awfully cute! Love it...
But why do you want to rewrite the story again?
Oh, your relatives live in Malaysia? I'm from Malaysia too.. Where do your relative live in M'sia btw?
12/9/2007 c24 Sydney
aww, Dante changed a little
but their so sweet together
I love this story so much
aww, Dante changed a little
but their so sweet together
I love this story so much
12/9/2007 c24 2mia5081
Oh, I loved this chapter! And YAY for a rewrite! I congratulate you on that lol, since one of my stories should be rewritten, but well, I'm suffering a bout of procrastination and so the rewrite will be put off...for awhile lol
Can't wait to read the new version!
~Mia
Oh, I loved this chapter! And YAY for a rewrite! I congratulate you on that lol, since one of my stories should be rewritten, but well, I'm suffering a bout of procrastination and so the rewrite will be put off...for awhile lol
Can't wait to read the new version!
~Mia
12/7/2007 c24 2SilentShadow123
hi..loved ur story it was beautifully written, i love your writitng style..it was swo much fun to read it.. the only advice i can give you about this is that the lack of emotion between Nora and Dante..the thing is..when Nora and Braden had their first kiss..it was amazing how u described her feelings.."had my hands in his amazing blonde locks, my fingers lacing through the blonde strands, clutching tightly (although not hurting him) as he kissed me, a lust-filled kiss and I kissed him back forcefully with just as much hunger"... but when Dante and Nora finally kissed...i was expecting it to me more in depth...compare to Braden..it felt like u were rushing it..there was really no spark in their first kis... it made me wonder if she actually had more feelings for Braden compare to Dante..It took forever for them to realize they hav feelings for each other..and after waiting for so long..it didn't seem like it was really finally happening..it just an idea ofcourse.. my opinion..but over all GREAT WORK
hi..loved ur story it was beautifully written, i love your writitng style..it was swo much fun to read it.. the only advice i can give you about this is that the lack of emotion between Nora and Dante..the thing is..when Nora and Braden had their first kiss..it was amazing how u described her feelings.."had my hands in his amazing blonde locks, my fingers lacing through the blonde strands, clutching tightly (although not hurting him) as he kissed me, a lust-filled kiss and I kissed him back forcefully with just as much hunger"... but when Dante and Nora finally kissed...i was expecting it to me more in depth...compare to Braden..it felt like u were rushing it..there was really no spark in their first kis... it made me wonder if she actually had more feelings for Braden compare to Dante..It took forever for them to realize they hav feelings for each other..and after waiting for so long..it didn't seem like it was really finally happening..it just an idea ofcourse.. my opinion..but over all GREAT WORK
12/5/2007 c24 SparklingStar25
Wow!I love this story!its absolutely amazing!
ant wait for the sequel..
Wow!I love this story!its absolutely amazing!
ant wait for the sequel..
12/2/2007 c24 12silentxscream
Mind I say,
you are wayy too awesome.
I love this story, absolutely love it.
Can't wait till you start a new one :D
Mind I say,
you are wayy too awesome.
I love this story, absolutely love it.
Can't wait till you start a new one :D
12/2/2007 c24 x o x l u u r v e
awh, well in that case, you have an extra : YOU'RE WELCOME.
i was wondering why my pen name was bolded, but then i read your note, i started smiling and going all, "awh, that's so SWEET OF HERR."
but what's this about taking the whole story down ? ;O le gasp.
i'm all for rewrites, really. but will you be taking down THIS story, and replacing your new chapters here, or will you take this down and start a NEW story?
aw, i'll miss it. what if you leave this one up and start a new story instead of taking this one down?
(i've got letting-go problems . . .)
but it's just a suggestion. i know a lot of people like this version, and no doubt that we'll love your new one (i'll be one of the first to review, i promise ^^) but we WILL miss this one if it's gone. -smilesinnocently-
thanks for the last installment! it wasn't disappointing. it was quite cute, and amusing comparing their characters from the beginning of the story to how they turned out towards the end. (: ahh, character development never cease to amaze me.
FANTASTIC job! i hope to hear from you soon.
♥ x o x luurve .
awh, well in that case, you have an extra : YOU'RE WELCOME.
i was wondering why my pen name was bolded, but then i read your note, i started smiling and going all, "awh, that's so SWEET OF HERR."
but what's this about taking the whole story down ? ;O le gasp.
i'm all for rewrites, really. but will you be taking down THIS story, and replacing your new chapters here, or will you take this down and start a NEW story?
aw, i'll miss it. what if you leave this one up and start a new story instead of taking this one down?
(i've got letting-go problems . . .)
but it's just a suggestion. i know a lot of people like this version, and no doubt that we'll love your new one (i'll be one of the first to review, i promise ^^) but we WILL miss this one if it's gone. -smilesinnocently-
thanks for the last installment! it wasn't disappointing. it was quite cute, and amusing comparing their characters from the beginning of the story to how they turned out towards the end. (: ahh, character development never cease to amaze me.
FANTASTIC job! i hope to hear from you soon.
♥ x o x luurve .
12/1/2007 c24 iLoveFiction
i really enjoyed reading this chapter. i loved how Dante was nervous around Norah's mother... so cute and what he said was really sweet. a great last chapter for an amazing and fabulous story! and I am really flattered and appreciative for the extra thanks, even though I should be the one thanking you for such a wonderful story! I am glad that this won't be the end of you, i really look forward to reading more stories by you in the near future!
i really enjoyed reading this chapter. i loved how Dante was nervous around Norah's mother... so cute and what he said was really sweet. a great last chapter for an amazing and fabulous story! and I am really flattered and appreciative for the extra thanks, even though I should be the one thanking you for such a wonderful story! I am glad that this won't be the end of you, i really look forward to reading more stories by you in the near future!
12/1/2007 c24 23Kaede Kitsurani
Aw! That was an adorable last chapter!
I'll be there for the rewrite!
Aw! That was an adorable last chapter!
I'll be there for the rewrite!
11/28/2007 c5 Lochi
that quiz thing was interesting =)) haha and Dante heard everything? lol I bet he's gonna laugh to her all the time now because of it haha
that quiz thing was interesting =)) haha and Dante heard everything? lol I bet he's gonna laugh to her all the time now because of it haha