for When a Rose Blooms in December11/28/2007 c1 
2wildwood
I've read the whole thing and I just want to say that I thought it was a great piece - I really liked the arrogant character of Dante Nichols, and how you wrote Norah and Dante's relationship, especially how when they first meet they just coolly call each other by their last name.
I also thought Braden and Norah was sweet - but he's gay! Good for him though I guess, at least the revelation stopped him from being moody! :P
Although some parts for me were a little fast, all in all I thought it was a cleverly pieced fiction and Ella was hilarious!
I really liked it.
2wildwoodI've read the whole thing and I just want to say that I thought it was a great piece - I really liked the arrogant character of Dante Nichols, and how you wrote Norah and Dante's relationship, especially how when they first meet they just coolly call each other by their last name.
I also thought Braden and Norah was sweet - but he's gay! Good for him though I guess, at least the revelation stopped him from being moody! :P
Although some parts for me were a little fast, all in all I thought it was a cleverly pieced fiction and Ella was hilarious!
I really liked it.
11/27/2007 c24 SapphireEyes16
this chapter was so cute! and i don't think u need 2 rewrite but itz ur story so goodluck with it, anywayz hope to read the rewrite soon!
this chapter was so cute! and i don't think u need 2 rewrite but itz ur story so goodluck with it, anywayz hope to read the rewrite soon!
11/27/2007 c24 11Tecna
An absolutely fantastic story I absolutely love it. I'mn sorry I haven't been reviewing consistently, but I have been constently busy and held up with other things in life. Hoenstly there is no break and especially since I've started college and I thought it would be fun, when really it's so tiring and stressful.
But you do know that when you take this fic down for a re-write, all your reviews etc will disappear. Anyways. still a fab chapter, I can't wait for the sequel, loved reading it.
Tecna ;)
11TecnaAn absolutely fantastic story I absolutely love it. I'mn sorry I haven't been reviewing consistently, but I have been constently busy and held up with other things in life. Hoenstly there is no break and especially since I've started college and I thought it would be fun, when really it's so tiring and stressful.
But you do know that when you take this fic down for a re-write, all your reviews etc will disappear. Anyways. still a fab chapter, I can't wait for the sequel, loved reading it.
Tecna ;)
11/26/2007 c24 2Inkhearts and Inkstains
I'm so happy, it's a great ending, it sorts everything out and you really see their love for one another. I look forward to the re-write.
2Inkhearts and InkstainsI'm so happy, it's a great ending, it sorts everything out and you really see their love for one another. I look forward to the re-write.
11/25/2007 c24 7The Key of Destiny
Yay! Congragulations (Did I spell that right ? O.o ) on completing it! (Did that sound weird?)
Cute ending! But.. you're re-writing it? I thought it was fine (But if you're doing it, that's all right). Yay! A sequel! (I wonder what's it's about... -thinking-)
7The Key of DestinyYay! Congragulations (Did I spell that right ? O.o ) on completing it! (Did that sound weird?)
Cute ending! But.. you're re-writing it? I thought it was fine (But if you're doing it, that's all right). Yay! A sequel! (I wonder what's it's about... -thinking-)
11/25/2007 c24 49Endowment's Seraph
aww! yay! I'm in bold! whoot! this was great, yes it lived up to my standars, and I think it was a nice ending. So you're going to do a re-write, yeah, i think i ought to do that with a few of my own, in fact that's why I took a few down, like, a few years ago and haven't worked on them since, but I hope you're fate was not my own (extreme indifference and procrastination). haha, well I got you on alert so I'll keep an eye out for everything. Great job, and don't forget to marvel in the glorious feeling of completion for a little while.
~Mel
49Endowment's Seraphaww! yay! I'm in bold! whoot! this was great, yes it lived up to my standars, and I think it was a nice ending. So you're going to do a re-write, yeah, i think i ought to do that with a few of my own, in fact that's why I took a few down, like, a few years ago and haven't worked on them since, but I hope you're fate was not my own (extreme indifference and procrastination). haha, well I got you on alert so I'll keep an eye out for everything. Great job, and don't forget to marvel in the glorious feeling of completion for a little while.
~Mel