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10/27/2006 c1 270dustytiger
hm very thought provoking i enjoyed it, good work!
10/26/2006 c1 322Basara
saddening...

ouch...

nice..
10/26/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
This is very well written. I love the thoughtful quality to this. Great work and keep writing.
10/25/2006 c1 16Remnants
on first glance, your stanzas are broken up weird. i know not if you've done this on purpose, but i think it would of made this poem a lot better. however, the sweet thing is its shortness and the great way it implies a story. All together good job
10/25/2006 c1 29yui-kun
kind of intriguing.
10/25/2006 c1 16Cheeseraptor5
Nice little message within, and great overall haiku. I couldn't write one to save my life.

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