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5/24/2010 c1 eiyuang999
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1/26/2009 c21 Beaternumber1
This Story is really fabulous. The only suggestion that i would have as a reader is, cut the side notes and add them to the story. Some people don't like it when authors write in the passive, so you might consider that, but i don't think side notes should be put in the middle of a chapter. You should write your fiction as if it were a book that were going to be published.

Great job! I really enjoyed this story and i am off to read the sequel!

~Beaternumber1
2/22/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Her friendship with MOF sounds great. Nice start. Hmm. I wonder who caused the dead body. Great job!

Thanks for adding "Exchanging Karma" to your alerts.

Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~
10/26/2007 c4 18Layla the fiend
Bob's the killer. He killed Garrett 'cause Garrett flirted with her. That's my theory.
10/26/2007 c1 Layla the fiend
This is incredibly well written. I'm already hooked!
6/23/2007 c1 6MizSphinx
I absolutely ADORE mystery...blame it on Sidney Sheldon and James Patterson lol. This has definitely intrigued me but it's one in the morning and my eyes are hating me right now. I MUST continue this...look out for a later review!

-:click:- Alerts (though it's finished but at least I'll find it easier that way lol)

-MizSphinx
5/14/2007 c1 1AluminumMuse
Quite a good start, I will finish reading this when have more time. One thing I would say is that you have chosen a limited omnitient voice, and could use it more to show personality and such.
5/12/2007 c21 32Taraum
Finally, they caught him! Nice ending, I must say. And what is this about his Liam character and...competition for CC? Please, update.
5/12/2007 c20 Taraum
He lived? I thought that she were finally rid of him. I wonder what will happen.
5/9/2007 c11 12sunflowersing
Uh oh! CC is mad!

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5/9/2007 c10 sunflowersing
Oh shit! Ah! Okay... calm.down.everything.will.be.okay. At least I hope so!

sunflowersing
5/9/2007 c9 sunflowersing
No! Don't leaver her alone! Arghh!

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5/9/2007 c8 sunflowersing
QUESTION? WHAT QUESTION, DAMNIT! On to the next chapter! I MUST find out! :-D

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5/9/2007 c7 sunflowersing
YAh-ah! Woo hoo! Kissy kissy action time! Yes! I wonder who that creepy dude was and what was going to happen if she ate them. I thought maybe the cynide thing was going to be true, but then why didn't CC pass out. Maybe it's just taking a while to get through his system. I'm sure a big muscular-hot-fit-finepoliceman such as CC has a lot of manliness to take down. *sigh* So dreamy! :-D

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5/9/2007 c6 sunflowersing
Hm... Could the package with the heart be from creep-dude Bob? I have a friend who understands the whole cell-phone, get in touch thingy. Her parents took her cell and to get in touch with her, they always call me. I've memorized the numbers now... She gets embarrassed, too! Haha!

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