for Never Hope10/2/2007 c1 
69Captain-Dalien
Oh, this is sad! Still, it was very well told, with an unexpectedly sad ending... Kudos. ~CD
69Captain-DalienOh, this is sad! Still, it was very well told, with an unexpectedly sad ending... Kudos. ~CD
1/29/2007 c1 14Kahn the Hun
Kinda sad, but i know exactly how she feels. Valentines Day is so depressing if you don't have anyone to love. Hopefully it will be different this year...
14Kahn the HunKinda sad, but i know exactly how she feels. Valentines Day is so depressing if you don't have anyone to love. Hopefully it will be different this year...
12/5/2006 c1 14CK Shorty
Really sad :o( At times, Valentines Day does suck for alot of people because all the couples are lovely dovey right out in the open. It's a bad holiday I tell ya! The sentences were choppy, but I think that's what you were going for. It wasn't too detailed, but I really liked this short one-shot. I can see this as more than a one-shot because the man heard her say that at the end. It can go anywhere after that. Again, great job on writing this! It was a good (yet sad!) read. :o)
14CK ShortyReally sad :o( At times, Valentines Day does suck for alot of people because all the couples are lovely dovey right out in the open. It's a bad holiday I tell ya! The sentences were choppy, but I think that's what you were going for. It wasn't too detailed, but I really liked this short one-shot. I can see this as more than a one-shot because the man heard her say that at the end. It can go anywhere after that. Again, great job on writing this! It was a good (yet sad!) read. :o)
10/28/2006 c1 49The Reverse Edge Blade
Poor girl. It made me sad reading it. You did a great job writing her emotions the way you did. Great text!
I was really moved when I read it!
The part with the guy who was waiting outside her dormitory...it really made it clear, with a scene like that, how she feels.
Great job! Write more stories!
Uchiha Hatori
49The Reverse Edge BladePoor girl. It made me sad reading it. You did a great job writing her emotions the way you did. Great text!
I was really moved when I read it!
The part with the guy who was waiting outside her dormitory...it really made it clear, with a scene like that, how she feels.
Great job! Write more stories!
Uchiha Hatori
10/28/2006 c1 ronwrites
SHort, succint, and surprising emotional for such a short piece. I like it. :)
SHort, succint, and surprising emotional for such a short piece. I like it. :)