for Unfair
2/3/2007 c2 19KSDM1985wow all i can say is AMEN! This poem is right on the money i cant help but think that way sometimes nice work
12/22/2006 c2 5C.F. AnneI liked the first one better...i don't know you could have developed the second more. anyway, these are fairly good poems. (: i hope that you end up writing more soon.