Just In
for Snow

8/15/2007 c1 28Kid In Converse
This is a great poem. I'm jealous of your ability to write out of rhyme, but still make it sound poetic. I think that you could work on keeping similar thoughts together, though. Like "perfect and glistening", could be "perfect, because it's glistening". I might just be your style, so please ignore me if I'm wrong. Anywho, really great poem. Keep up the fantastic writing! :-)
10/27/2006 c1 59Frore
Ah, how I love snow...

The way you describe how such a detail impacts you is very nice. There is no doubt left between the lines.

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