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I am thoroughly impressed. You've taken this vein of poetry to whole other level (pun intended :D). The rhyming is amazing, I've got to say. The meter might be a bit sketchy at times, but it recovers itself at the end for a great finish.
Very dark and yet at the same time attacking the reader (or whomever the poem is addressing) in a way that makes you actually feel bad for the speaker. Good work!
65ContinuationI am thoroughly impressed. You've taken this vein of poetry to whole other level (pun intended :D). The rhyming is amazing, I've got to say. The meter might be a bit sketchy at times, but it recovers itself at the end for a great finish.
Very dark and yet at the same time attacking the reader (or whomever the poem is addressing) in a way that makes you actually feel bad for the speaker. Good work!