
7/23/2012 c1 Topaz
That was really gross ewwwwwwwwwwww
That was really gross ewwwwwwwwwwww
7/22/2012 c1 Guest
That was soooooooo gross ewwwwwwwwwww
That was soooooooo gross ewwwwwwwwwww
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3/28/2009 c1
36Kate Marshall
This is so creepy. But in a 'Grimm's fairytale' kind of way that I actually kind of appreciate. I liked the simple phrasing; it really suited the child's thoughts. I thought it was written pretty well. :)

This is so creepy. But in a 'Grimm's fairytale' kind of way that I actually kind of appreciate. I liked the simple phrasing; it really suited the child's thoughts. I thought it was written pretty well. :)
11/11/2008 c1 DA-Amanda
I don't see how you can eat someone and they don't wake up...
I love cannibalism...No I hate it, but I love reading about it, although when you think of it it's disgusting of course.
Can I take this story and make it into a longer one? Because that's its only fault, really, it's a bit short. Don't worry, I wouldn't post it or pass it off as my own, I just love writing and this is really inspiring. Take it as a compliment.
I don't see how you can eat someone and they don't wake up...
I love cannibalism...No I hate it, but I love reading about it, although when you think of it it's disgusting of course.
Can I take this story and make it into a longer one? Because that's its only fault, really, it's a bit short. Don't worry, I wouldn't post it or pass it off as my own, I just love writing and this is really inspiring. Take it as a compliment.
3/30/2008 c1 Horror-Lover
Wow. This is so weird but scary at the same time.
So, she became a zombie?
Wow. This is so weird but scary at the same time.
So, she became a zombie?
4/6/2007 c1
3dead already
You know, that's actually pretty cute despite the little girl being a cannibal. I like it. Nice and simple, not over the top, with just the right amount of creepiness.

You know, that's actually pretty cute despite the little girl being a cannibal. I like it. Nice and simple, not over the top, with just the right amount of creepiness.
3/25/2007 c1
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That's creepy. It reminds of a scary children's story in a way. It also makes me think of Very creepy, but for a short story it's not bad. Well done.
~Cirien Phoenix

That's creepy. It reminds of a scary children's story in a way. It also makes me think of Very creepy, but for a short story it's not bad. Well done.
~Cirien Phoenix
2/3/2007 c1
4Trazia
ok i will admit i did not like this story but not that it was written bad even thoug you should reframe from useing things like 'cry, cry, cry' but that was not the reason i didn't like it, it was becasue i hate canabalism, but thats only my personal dislike other then that you have a talent in writting.

ok i will admit i did not like this story but not that it was written bad even thoug you should reframe from useing things like 'cry, cry, cry' but that was not the reason i didn't like it, it was becasue i hate canabalism, but thats only my personal dislike other then that you have a talent in writting.
12/19/2006 c1 Sarah
I liked it. It was short, sweet, to the point. I also thought that it was really funny. I thought the second paragraph was really confusing. I had to read it a couple of times to get it. Maybe you should word it differet. I think that paragraph is all over the place. You might want to orinize it a little better.
I liked it. It was short, sweet, to the point. I also thought that it was really funny. I thought the second paragraph was really confusing. I had to read it a couple of times to get it. Maybe you should word it differet. I think that paragraph is all over the place. You might want to orinize it a little better.