
12/31/2006 c1
52Aelux
The runon ideas give this piece a good intensity. It feels like you are sort of freefalling as you're reading it. Good job. I don't think i've seen someone write with as much style variety as you do.

The runon ideas give this piece a good intensity. It feels like you are sort of freefalling as you're reading it. Good job. I don't think i've seen someone write with as much style variety as you do.
11/18/2006 c1
17sporkofdoom
(tickticktick but you've lost concept of time)That's my favorite part. The piece is chilling.

(tickticktick but you've lost concept of time)That's my favorite part. The piece is chilling.