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12/31/2006 c1 52Aelux
The runon ideas give this piece a good intensity. It feels like you are sort of freefalling as you're reading it. Good job. I don't think i've seen someone write with as much style variety as you do.
11/18/2006 c1 17sporkofdoom
(tickticktick but you've lost concept of time)That's my favorite part. The piece is chilling.
10/29/2006 c1 32eldrin
I love how stream-of-consciousness this feels with its multiple and rapid moments.
10/29/2006 c1 10TrunkZy
Oh god. :| that was beautiful. Very well-thought off and... well beautiful.

"feeling the multiple collisions inside the clockwork machinery of your heart" The multiple threw me off. I think it would sound much better without.

Apart from that - instant fav!

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