
10/29/2006 c1
37TaltushMeiMei
Wow, this is scary. And very different from previous poems... Hm. I like the use of italics to stress certain things. And the formatting also kind of enhances the creepiness... Really good job.

Wow, this is scary. And very different from previous poems... Hm. I like the use of italics to stress certain things. And the formatting also kind of enhances the creepiness... Really good job.