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12/5/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
I liked it, but the end kind of made me go huh? What? Where did the poem go? Not a very good sense of closure, but maybe that's what you wanted. That's minor though...It was short and to the point, which is always good, and metaphorical. Overall, a pretty good poem.
11/5/2006 c1 4Trazia
this is good it's a poem right you are a good poet

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