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12elisefeyI can see why you called it emo, but either way it's very well done. The emotion is raw and comes across powerfully. Great job!
4/14/2007 c1 20ItazuThanks for commenting my story by the way!
Anyways, this is such a good poem in my opinion. You might've been able to use a better selection of words, but I was able to picture events for it. I think it'd be a good song too. It's a very emotional poem. :)
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