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for If I Could Live Forever

8/2/2007 c1 12elisefey
[The hot water cascaded down my body and engulfed me in an imitation warmth that I welcomed everyday. ] - I love this line. It's so sad and comforting at the same time.

Oh my word! This is one of the most intriguing openings to a story I have ever read on FP! I'm dying to know what happens next; what exactly is her curse, why is she cursed, will she ever find her love? These questions are rioting around in my mind and it's wonderful, I want to read more to find the answers. A great beginning full of mystery and promise. If you ever choose to continue this I will definitely return to read it.

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