for I'm the River12/3/2006 c1 
104FunkyFlower
lol, this actually flows like a liquid too. beautiful imagery and rhyming is awesome. great job ;)
~mez~
104FunkyFlowerlol, this actually flows like a liquid too. beautiful imagery and rhyming is awesome. great job ;)
~mez~
10/31/2006 c1 myno
I'm particularly fond of the last line of this... I enjoy reading your poetry because your large vocabulary and interesting images keep me engaged.
I'm particularly fond of the last line of this... I enjoy reading your poetry because your large vocabulary and interesting images keep me engaged.
10/30/2006 c1 82Twilit Exaggerance
Impressively written, although I believe that the last two lines break the rhythm you built throughout the poem, fizzling the ending somewhat.
Otherwise, I did like the imagery and linkage you used. Good work.
82Twilit ExaggeranceImpressively written, although I believe that the last two lines break the rhythm you built throughout the poem, fizzling the ending somewhat.
Otherwise, I did like the imagery and linkage you used. Good work.