for bound, hell12/13/2006 c1 
612simpleplan13
I like this.. the descriptions are powerful and the john edwards reference was cool.. I really LOVE that last line because its so ttue
612simpleplan13I like this.. the descriptions are powerful and the john edwards reference was cool.. I really LOVE that last line because its so ttue
11/4/2006 c1 94smile persephone
This does remind me of the literature of those times, mostly for the sheer power of it all. They believed so adamantly. There are many ways to interpret this piece; I love that about it.
94smile persephoneThis does remind me of the literature of those times, mostly for the sheer power of it all. They believed so adamantly. There are many ways to interpret this piece; I love that about it.
11/2/2006 c1 194Aslan Israel
It's somehow beautiful. And I love the impact of your last statement. Very nice.
194Aslan IsraelIt's somehow beautiful. And I love the impact of your last statement. Very nice.
10/30/2006 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Interesting! A little wordy at times "with which we are..." but still full of emotion.
6Nobody-n-ParticularInteresting! A little wordy at times "with which we are..." but still full of emotion.