for Perspective Tumor12/3/2006 c1 
104FunkyFlower
err... i am seriously perplexed, lol. *scrutinises* erm, well.. i liked the rhyming, especially at the beginning and the best part was: They only glimmer bolder shades
when I call them to the torch.
Here I am, beside your glow-
the last moment is due to approach.
great job though ;)
~mez~
104FunkyFlowererr... i am seriously perplexed, lol. *scrutinises* erm, well.. i liked the rhyming, especially at the beginning and the best part was: They only glimmer bolder shades
when I call them to the torch.
Here I am, beside your glow-
the last moment is due to approach.
great job though ;)
~mez~
10/31/2006 c1 myno
what a delightfully strange poem! There are, however, a few errors- syntehtic should be synthetic, eachother split into two words, and so on. This one made me laugh though.
what a delightfully strange poem! There are, however, a few errors- syntehtic should be synthetic, eachother split into two words, and so on. This one made me laugh though.