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11/6/2006 c1 3Da Vinci at Work
This is a good poem. I like how it contemplates the pros and cons of consequences. True, consequences are sometimes harsh, but without them, would we actually commit our actions?
10/31/2006 c1 5Twist130
This reminded me of 'World War I', some. Or maybe you showed this one to me? Whatever.

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10/31/2006 c1 An-Author-At-Heart
LOVELY! I always appreciate a great rhyming poem, and this one's great. The rhymes go well and they're not forced, it all flows nicely. It was well-written, beautiful. GOod job!

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