for There's No More10/21/2007 c1 
51Spider-Matt
My god, this is fantastic! Are you, like, a professional! You are so totally gonna be famous one day. ;-)
Seriously, I really like this. I miss your writing.
51Spider-MattMy god, this is fantastic! Are you, like, a professional! You are so totally gonna be famous one day. ;-)
Seriously, I really like this. I miss your writing.
3/6/2007 c1 8hagiasophia
i wish i could here the music! but it's so good you can almost hear it in your mind! :D ☻
8hagiasophiai wish i could here the music! but it's so good you can almost hear it in your mind! :D ☻
12/13/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the repition and the rhyming.. too bad we cant hear the music... nicely done
612simpleplan13I like the repition and the rhyming.. too bad we cant hear the music... nicely done
11/22/2006 c1 Devin Brines
It was very good. The only problem, I thought, was that you rhymed tear with clear. That latter of those lines sounds forced. The chorus is sort of weak. I thought some of the other stanzas were better, but well done, nonetheless. Keep it up.
It was very good. The only problem, I thought, was that you rhymed tear with clear. That latter of those lines sounds forced. The chorus is sort of weak. I thought some of the other stanzas were better, but well done, nonetheless. Keep it up.
11/12/2006 c1 19Awen1923
Very nice. You have some good lines. I wish I could hear the music, it tends to add to the overall feel of the lyrics.
19Awen1923Very nice. You have some good lines. I wish I could hear the music, it tends to add to the overall feel of the lyrics.
11/6/2006 c1 59S0ulSearching
ooh i like this-i wish i could hear the music you have in mind-itd be funny to see if its the same ^_^
-pamm-x3
59S0ulSearchingooh i like this-i wish i could hear the music you have in mind-itd be funny to see if its the same ^_^
-pamm-x3
11/1/2006 c1 243ShadowFane
This was really cool. I wish I could actually hear the song. :) Great job!
SF
243ShadowFaneThis was really cool. I wish I could actually hear the song. :) Great job!
SF