for Does he know?11/1/2006 c1 
67helpless-pretender
I like it. this was very well writen and i can relate. I think alot of people can.
67helpless-pretenderI like it. this was very well writen and i can relate. I think alot of people can.
11/1/2006 c1 89Shadows in the Fire
I've had this feeling before! You put it well on paper. I think it is very good...try adding more feelings and detail next time but keep this one how it is. It is so good!
Keep it up!
-Shadow
89Shadows in the FireI've had this feeling before! You put it well on paper. I think it is very good...try adding more feelings and detail next time but keep this one how it is. It is so good!
Keep it up!
-Shadow