for Wondering11/17/2006 c1 
1Okami Moon
I liked all of the repetition in this poem. It made it flow really well. I also like how the whole poem ends up being a circle. Good job!
1Okami MoonI liked all of the repetition in this poem. It made it flow really well. I also like how the whole poem ends up being a circle. Good job!
11/3/2006 c1 56felicia13
*gasp* You cheater, you! Didn't you already review Aeilia as bd21? Why have you made more than one profile? What a loser ... now I have two of you to follow ... rawr. You could have TOLD ME! I mean, I'd have reviewed all three pieces if I'd known.
Whoa. This poem is so completely different from your usual style, K. Seriously. It's like ... mind blowing.
I absolutely love it, dear. The whole thing flows like a river and is twice as wet. As long as we're talking about wet as in cool. See that connection?
*cough* Wonderful work.
Felicia.
56felicia13*gasp* You cheater, you! Didn't you already review Aeilia as bd21? Why have you made more than one profile? What a loser ... now I have two of you to follow ... rawr. You could have TOLD ME! I mean, I'd have reviewed all three pieces if I'd known.
Whoa. This poem is so completely different from your usual style, K. Seriously. It's like ... mind blowing.
I absolutely love it, dear. The whole thing flows like a river and is twice as wet. As long as we're talking about wet as in cool. See that connection?
*cough* Wonderful work.
Felicia.
11/2/2006 c1 9Sakura Taking
I find this intense but it is very realistic. I love how the same kind of feeling easily flows through the entire poem. I really like the way you took the "pointlessness" at the beginning and turned it into not so pointless at the end. Awesome work! Keep it up! =)
9Sakura TakingI find this intense but it is very realistic. I love how the same kind of feeling easily flows through the entire poem. I really like the way you took the "pointlessness" at the beginning and turned it into not so pointless at the end. Awesome work! Keep it up! =)
11/1/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
Very thoughtful, indeed. I loved the repetition. It made it really artsy. Also, the last stanza-ish (I know you can't really tell with the formatting) but it really summed everything up. I like how you incorporated lines from the beginning and changed it to conclude. Great job. Keep up the awesome work!
16brokendreams21Very thoughtful, indeed. I loved the repetition. It made it really artsy. Also, the last stanza-ish (I know you can't really tell with the formatting) but it really summed everything up. I like how you incorporated lines from the beginning and changed it to conclude. Great job. Keep up the awesome work!