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4/12/2007 c1 11The White Angel of Darkness
So very beautiful
1/11/2007 c1 polyphonic spree
Very pretty poem! =]

It's nice and short, and I like that it's about the sun... all nice and happy. And it has good flow too.

I probably wouldn't be able to write a poem for my life, save for the sixth grade poems I wrote years ago about some Mr. Cat.

:-)

Keep up the good work!

-Teresa

And p.s. you're very good at writing poems!
11/2/2006 c1 6Tomiko90
Another brilliant poem! I love this! When I read them they make me feel...I don't know! Just...WOW! you're an amazing writer! And I see that you thanked me! I feel super special now! :D Well keep up the fabulous work!
11/2/2006 c1 31Holly Rose E
i really enjoyed how you implemented slight olde english into it, it gave it a very nice romantic feel to it... wonderful description [[i especially enjoyed the rum part]].

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