for NaNoWriMo: the Detective11/26/2006 c1 Crazy Sadie
Hey, guess who again! Nice detective story, but...you're a Nano failure. I liked the "inner monologue" part. It cracked me up.
Hey, guess who again! Nice detective story, but...you're a Nano failure. I liked the "inner monologue" part. It cracked me up.
11/5/2006 c1 Mikorya
GUESS WHO! ^_^ A very interesting first chapter for a PI story, indeed ... but can you follow it is the question. =P
I did catch a problem with the writing up near the beginning, but when I re-scanned it I couldn't find it again. Maybe you can. XD In any case, why not drop me an email or lemme know your current IM names so I can find you online and have a chat. It's been a long time. ^_^ I'm glad I still have your fictionpress flagged so they email me when you write stories.
Teraesa
GUESS WHO! ^_^ A very interesting first chapter for a PI story, indeed ... but can you follow it is the question. =P
I did catch a problem with the writing up near the beginning, but when I re-scanned it I couldn't find it again. Maybe you can. XD In any case, why not drop me an email or lemme know your current IM names so I can find you online and have a chat. It's been a long time. ^_^ I'm glad I still have your fictionpress flagged so they email me when you write stories.
Teraesa