for The Lightning Arrows of Apprehension11/12/2007 c1 
119Silent Dreamer
this is so sad. i've been through it before. well minus the gun part lol. very good work.
119Silent Dreamerthis is so sad. i've been through it before. well minus the gun part lol. very good work.
2/28/2007 c1 31Shadow Gryphon
Really, really good. It's got a powerful feel to it-pulls you along straight to the end.
31Shadow GryphonReally, really good. It's got a powerful feel to it-pulls you along straight to the end.