for In places least expected11/5/2006 c1 KittenzAndTheeGlitz
Luke is in this story! Thank gawd! Great cliffhanger, I'm interested. :)
Luke is in this story! Thank gawd! Great cliffhanger, I'm interested. :)
11/5/2006 c1 
8Sundown
I'm already very intrigued! I like this character...(maybe because i'm italian too!) but this has a fascinating, already evolving plot. Written wonderfully, lovely style. Yay!
8SundownI'm already very intrigued! I like this character...(maybe because i'm italian too!) but this has a fascinating, already evolving plot. Written wonderfully, lovely style. Yay!
11/3/2006 c1 green
Cliffhanger! I was wonderfully surprised to see you had started a new story. I wonder if Jaime finds out about the affair, and what the others will do to him.I appologize to you when I say that it seems much more interesting than "Luke and Ezra" but it still can't compete with "The Two of Us".
Cliffhanger! I was wonderfully surprised to see you had started a new story. I wonder if Jaime finds out about the affair, and what the others will do to him.I appologize to you when I say that it seems much more interesting than "Luke and Ezra" but it still can't compete with "The Two of Us".
11/3/2006 c1 25Esquirella
This is a great new character you've come up with! You can't help but be drawn to the poor guy.
25EsquirellaThis is a great new character you've come up with! You can't help but be drawn to the poor guy.
11/3/2006 c1 3BabyKeepItSurreal
O.O I love it! Carmine is great, I really like him. And Luke is in this story! Yay Luke. I wonder how things will pan out with the whole Geoff/Shay situation. So Carmine bitched up? Was he willing in his bitching up? Hmm, update soon!
3BabyKeepItSurrealO.O I love it! Carmine is great, I really like him. And Luke is in this story! Yay Luke. I wonder how things will pan out with the whole Geoff/Shay situation. So Carmine bitched up? Was he willing in his bitching up? Hmm, update soon!
11/3/2006 c1 19diebyownhands
A new story! it seems very interesting... I'm trying to remember if Shay was mentioned in previous stories.
Something tells me he will get the job but I wonder how Shay will react to him.
19diebyownhandsA new story! it seems very interesting... I'm trying to remember if Shay was mentioned in previous stories.
Something tells me he will get the job but I wonder how Shay will react to him.
11/3/2006 c1 4mandrake-o
I see you've branched off again. Why do I get the feeling that Carmine's going to get this job?
Anyway, I'll let you get to it.
=) Mandraco.
4mandrake-oI see you've branched off again. Why do I get the feeling that Carmine's going to get this job?
Anyway, I'll let you get to it.
=) Mandraco.