for A Stormy Silence8/20/2008 c1 
1barelyamiable
I really have no idea what to think of this.
It was a really good read, for one thing.
I loved seeing the Siren develop character.
You did a very good job.
I've always liked fantasy and especially sirens.
And you've put a wonderful new twist on it.
I thought that this was very well-written.
It was tragic, but in brilliantly hopeful way.
She finally learned was love was in the end.
(:
1barelyamiableI really have no idea what to think of this.
It was a really good read, for one thing.
I loved seeing the Siren develop character.
You did a very good job.
I've always liked fantasy and especially sirens.
And you've put a wonderful new twist on it.
I thought that this was very well-written.
It was tragic, but in brilliantly hopeful way.
She finally learned was love was in the end.
(:
5/29/2008 c1 1Cloudshaker
I didn't know what to say after reading this. Just...kind of sat still for awhile and stared at the screen.
I -really- liked it. I'm going to have to check out your other pieces now, for sure.
1CloudshakerI didn't know what to say after reading this. Just...kind of sat still for awhile and stared at the screen.
I -really- liked it. I'm going to have to check out your other pieces now, for sure.
4/3/2007 c1 Infinitis
God forbid, I did like this! It was so... heartmoving. Very well written o.- I can tell this was something you didn't make on the wim. Good job!
God forbid, I did like this! It was so... heartmoving. Very well written o.- I can tell this was something you didn't make on the wim. Good job!
11/15/2006 c1 29Violent.Delights
Wow...right from the beginning I was hooked. This is beautiful. Loved it.
29Violent.DelightsWow...right from the beginning I was hooked. This is beautiful. Loved it.
11/13/2006 c1 19Rawkin Paradox
I liked it! It gave a different perspective and I liked it because you took the character of the siren into depth. Keep it up!
19Rawkin ParadoxI liked it! It gave a different perspective and I liked it because you took the character of the siren into depth. Keep it up!
11/12/2006 c1 Beks
Well, you already know that I like this but I just wanted to say it again. But do you remember how we were saying that something was missing? Well you know the second time she calls and kills a man? The same thing happens as the first time. I know that's the point, that the sailers die over and over again but maybe you could describe the second time more or have more happen so that scene can have more meaning. Anyways, once I figured that out (took me long enough, you probably already knew that)I enjoyed it more this time than the first time I read it. I think I could go so far as to say I love it. So keep on writing, you have no idea how excited I get when I see you have a new story or poem up =D
Well, you already know that I like this but I just wanted to say it again. But do you remember how we were saying that something was missing? Well you know the second time she calls and kills a man? The same thing happens as the first time. I know that's the point, that the sailers die over and over again but maybe you could describe the second time more or have more happen so that scene can have more meaning. Anyways, once I figured that out (took me long enough, you probably already knew that)I enjoyed it more this time than the first time I read it. I think I could go so far as to say I love it. So keep on writing, you have no idea how excited I get when I see you have a new story or poem up =D
11/3/2006 c1 16Long Island Iced Tea
I wish I could give you a detailed review but this is just so perfect (I'm serious) that I can't find anything to fault. I just...love it.
16Long Island Iced TeaI wish I could give you a detailed review but this is just so perfect (I'm serious) that I can't find anything to fault. I just...love it.