Reviews: Your Shallow Habits

2/23/2015 c1

16mizgardenia21
Loves this.
Absolutely beautiful.

5/18/2012 c1 mortality.is.overrated
wow!did you actually write this? its REALLY good!

2/9/2008 c1

2ElleAyyeBabii
So I've sent this poem to about eight of my friends, and they're absolutely in love with it. It's brilliant and you should continue writing more of them, my friends and I will be looking.

7/4/2007 c1

2hellohellolove
It's great, really gets the point across and I like your choice of words, very descriptive.

1/24/2007 c1 Hyperroll
beautifully written. so much taint, yet so much hope.

11/10/2006 c1 123123123123123po
i loved it! so moving

11/4/2006 c1 meer
beautiful.

11/3/2006 c1 angelgrl
i love this! love the last part 'ur too old to live like this...but too young to die.' love it!

11/3/2006 c1

4fluffykitty
I like it a lot. Very powerful.

11/3/2006 c1

11PocoSnow15
Wow! That was absolutely amazing! Your words flow together so nicely...I really loved it!