
11/3/2006 c1
1DesertRose2450
This was really good, but it was a little confusing. Overall, I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

This was really good, but it was a little confusing. Overall, I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
11/3/2006 c1 Foolish Heart
Wow, i love the beginning! It's a good story so far. Not many fictionpress stories are very well-written, but, this one really makes my list. I can't wait for more. Update soon!
~Jacy
Wow, i love the beginning! It's a good story so far. Not many fictionpress stories are very well-written, but, this one really makes my list. I can't wait for more. Update soon!
~Jacy
11/3/2006 c1 Lady Moonwind
Wow, i love it! It's really well written. It's a little confusing...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow, i love it! It's really well written. It's a little confusing...
Can't wait for the next chapter!