for Sweet Nothings2/16/2020 c1 Otaku ami
Wow this story made me cry to pieces. I am glad she moved on and stuff. This was like the best take I have eve heard of a girl finally letting go and moving on. The entire journey of them being best friends, falling in love, being a couple and eventually losing him.
Wow this story made me cry to pieces. I am glad she moved on and stuff. This was like the best take I have eve heard of a girl finally letting go and moving on. The entire journey of them being best friends, falling in love, being a couple and eventually losing him.
9/12/2019 c1 Mukta Gadgil
I won't lie, this made me cry like a baby. A woman's tale of letting go of the love of her life. The most irresistible and heartwarming story slowly turning into a tragedy. I could almost feel the pain.
I won't lie, this made me cry like a baby. A woman's tale of letting go of the love of her life. The most irresistible and heartwarming story slowly turning into a tragedy. I could almost feel the pain.
6/11/2019 c1 foreverwriting
aweee this story is so heartwarming! loved how you wrote in the end that Matt was gone and not in the beginning, cause then we would all know why they couldn't be together and there wouldn't be as much suspense.
aweee this story is so heartwarming! loved how you wrote in the end that Matt was gone and not in the beginning, cause then we would all know why they couldn't be together and there wouldn't be as much suspense.
9/28/2016 c1 Guest
YOu really made me cry .I hadn't cried this hard for any other stories .I wished so hard that matt would come back .You are a great author
YOu really made me cry .I hadn't cried this hard for any other stories .I wished so hard that matt would come back .You are a great author
5/11/2015 c1 Guest
Wow.. this was SOMETHING. You got my attention from the first sentence itself. The complexities that these two shared.. just...
At first I simply couldn't understand how these two managed to communicate. You know, after the flashbacks and what could possibly go wrong.
But the end, man, the end. It just KILLED me. I just suck in my breath. Didn't see that coming.
Oh well.. needless to say but this was.. I can't, I just can't. And your writing is AWESOME. Legit.
Wow.. this was SOMETHING. You got my attention from the first sentence itself. The complexities that these two shared.. just...
At first I simply couldn't understand how these two managed to communicate. You know, after the flashbacks and what could possibly go wrong.
But the end, man, the end. It just KILLED me. I just suck in my breath. Didn't see that coming.
Oh well.. needless to say but this was.. I can't, I just can't. And your writing is AWESOME. Legit.
4/12/2015 c1 toffeema
oh my goodness - that was soo good. Totally did not see that coming. Thanks for sharing.
oh my goodness - that was soo good. Totally did not see that coming. Thanks for sharing.
6/30/2014 c1 The fuzz
Just read you story again and i have to say my beart breaks every time. Damn, i really wish some miracle would happen so that in the end Matt and Rayne could be together. Really love it though :)
Just read you story again and i have to say my beart breaks every time. Damn, i really wish some miracle would happen so that in the end Matt and Rayne could be together. Really love it though :)
10/23/2013 c1 Fangalitious
Well, that was probably the most heart-breaking thing I've ever read. Definitely started crying, not going to lie. I'd love to say it was amazing and I loved it - both of which are true, in a sense - but that would be misleading to the reading. It was amazing in the agony it made me feel, in the pain I felt for the characters' situations; I loved it in the sense that I loved the connection formed with the back stories and the fondness between the two main characters. But overall? I kinda want to hate it. But I can't, unfortunately, because you're too good of an author and this is too deep of a story. So congrats. You win.
Well, that was probably the most heart-breaking thing I've ever read. Definitely started crying, not going to lie. I'd love to say it was amazing and I loved it - both of which are true, in a sense - but that would be misleading to the reading. It was amazing in the agony it made me feel, in the pain I felt for the characters' situations; I loved it in the sense that I loved the connection formed with the back stories and the fondness between the two main characters. But overall? I kinda want to hate it. But I can't, unfortunately, because you're too good of an author and this is too deep of a story. So congrats. You win.
11/18/2012 c1 heal me forever
is matt dead? i did not get dat part oh my gosh i am crying so badly gosh WHY ? dat is SO damn SAD wid whom did she speak all dat had he died in car accident? ya is he in bed?
nd is she pregant?
nd i dnt think she shuld move on...:((((((((((((((((
is matt dead? i did not get dat part oh my gosh i am crying so badly gosh WHY ? dat is SO damn SAD wid whom did she speak all dat had he died in car accident? ya is he in bed?
nd is she pregant?
nd i dnt think she shuld move on...:((((((((((((((((
8/30/2012 c1 
7Dandy352
Ouch I didn't see that coming. You're one good writer. God bless with your career!
7Dandy352Ouch I didn't see that coming. You're one good writer. God bless with your career!
12/19/2011 c1 D
At first I was frustrated at Rayne, because it was so obvious that they were in love! And sure, Andrew sounds nice, but their memories and what not was so cute, so i automatically paired them up. And sure, that must have been the effect you were going for, but... WOW. that was so sad. I forgive Rayne. but Oh my god.. that was brilliantly written. I feel like crying!
At first I was frustrated at Rayne, because it was so obvious that they were in love! And sure, Andrew sounds nice, but their memories and what not was so cute, so i automatically paired them up. And sure, that must have been the effect you were going for, but... WOW. that was so sad. I forgive Rayne. but Oh my god.. that was brilliantly written. I feel like crying!
12/19/2011 c1 YOU ARE AMAZING
This touched me. inappropiately. I'm HAUNTED cause of this. I forced several of my friends to read it... just because of how amazingly awesome this is. I tear up every time I read... and it's really masochistic of me to read it, because it's SO haunting, but it's soooo good that I HAVE to read it every time I need inspiration.
This touched me. inappropiately. I'm HAUNTED cause of this. I forced several of my friends to read it... just because of how amazingly awesome this is. I tear up every time I read... and it's really masochistic of me to read it, because it's SO haunting, but it's soooo good that I HAVE to read it every time I need inspiration.
8/10/2011 c1 Random Person
I've read this story before a long time ago, and just realized I never reviewed. I want you to know you created a complete masterpiece. Everything about this story was so utterly brilliant. The mood, tone, your writing style, the characters, the ending-it was all perfect.
I love stories that touch me. Something that can actually make me cry or whatever, I think that's more special than a typical humor/romance story, because it actually affects you.
Well, I also feel the need to add... One of my main goals in life is to create a story like that, too. One that touches people's hearts. I imagine that's a lot of peoples goals. So, if that was your intention-you truly succeeded. You have created this masterpiece that my friend and I still talk about all this time after reading it, a story that I look up to and think of when I need inspiration. I feel like I can never convey myself properly when reviewing, like I can't truly let the author know how I really feel. This brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for this.
I've read this story before a long time ago, and just realized I never reviewed. I want you to know you created a complete masterpiece. Everything about this story was so utterly brilliant. The mood, tone, your writing style, the characters, the ending-it was all perfect.
I love stories that touch me. Something that can actually make me cry or whatever, I think that's more special than a typical humor/romance story, because it actually affects you.
Well, I also feel the need to add... One of my main goals in life is to create a story like that, too. One that touches people's hearts. I imagine that's a lot of peoples goals. So, if that was your intention-you truly succeeded. You have created this masterpiece that my friend and I still talk about all this time after reading it, a story that I look up to and think of when I need inspiration. I feel like I can never convey myself properly when reviewing, like I can't truly let the author know how I really feel. This brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for this.