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3/20/2008 c2 Annie
Do you read your writing before you post it? I had a hard time following your story. First of all, you changed perspectives. The introduction was all from a "she" point of view and the other chapter was in first person. Second, read your writing out loud before you post it. There were so many parts where it probably made sense in your head, but it didn't on paper. You're writing is ok, but I've read some of your other stories and most of your chapters are way too short. The length would be fine if you posted, say, everyday, but you're not. My advice is you need to slow down and elaborate. Concentrate on making your chapters longer and explaining a bit more. And read everything through before you send stick it out. Maybe have a freind read it as well to correct spelling and grammatical errors. Good luck on your writing.

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