11/27/2006 c6 Murphy's Lawyer
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!
Talk about a sorority party gone wrong! AIIE!
UPDATE, YOU!
~ LL XD
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!
Talk about a sorority party gone wrong! AIIE!
UPDATE, YOU!
~ LL XD
11/23/2006 c6 Miken
Wah you can't do that! Update now, I want to know who's going to save them! Is it going to be Christian? ::crosses fingers::
Wah you can't do that! Update now, I want to know who's going to save them! Is it going to be Christian? ::crosses fingers::
11/22/2006 c6 angelic
augh! I can't believe you left it with a major cliffy! you had better update soon then or I will never allow you to do this again! hehe
augh! I can't believe you left it with a major cliffy! you had better update soon then or I will never allow you to do this again! hehe
11/22/2006 c6 4In.the.Wardrobe
oh...cliffhanger. lol. good chapter. i dont know whats up with fictionpress. none of the story alerts and anything are coming through. grr. but im glad i checked this today for an update. i cant wait for more!
oh...cliffhanger. lol. good chapter. i dont know whats up with fictionpress. none of the story alerts and anything are coming through. grr. but im glad i checked this today for an update. i cant wait for more!
11/21/2006 c6 12Kraheera-Raven
ACK! SAVE THEM!
Ok, now that I've flipped out... this is a great story. Really, I like it a lot and I look forward to reading more.
ACK! SAVE THEM!
Ok, now that I've flipped out... this is a great story. Really, I like it a lot and I look forward to reading more.
11/20/2006 c5 weodudewa
... And the plot thinkens. I loved the playfullness at the biginning of this chapter, and the punch in the face made me laugh out loud. Great chapter, sounds like i can expect great things in the following chapters to come. Great story!
... And the plot thinkens. I loved the playfullness at the biginning of this chapter, and the punch in the face made me laugh out loud. Great chapter, sounds like i can expect great things in the following chapters to come. Great story!
11/20/2006 c4 dudeson
The cliche of the exited boys gawking at the game playing girl never gets old. this chapter was fun to read, i hope for more like this later in your story. im on to chaper 5 now!
The cliche of the exited boys gawking at the game playing girl never gets old. this chapter was fun to read, i hope for more like this later in your story. im on to chaper 5 now!
11/20/2006 c3 Cooldude
I like the strady pace of this story developing charaters, keep it up.
I like the strady pace of this story developing charaters, keep it up.
11/20/2006 c5 4In.the.Wardrobe
hey. i had this on story alert but the alerts didnt come so i had no idea you'd updated. damn. lol. but good chapters. the fighting scene was awesome. im such a crappy quesser lol. i cant wait for more so please update soon.
hey. i had this on story alert but the alerts didnt come so i had no idea you'd updated. damn. lol. but good chapters. the fighting scene was awesome. im such a crappy quesser lol. i cant wait for more so please update soon.
11/20/2006 c5 18pinkfluffyoranges
Well, it's been a long time since i've read this story, have you reposted it?
Well, it's been a long time since i've read this story, have you reposted it?
11/19/2006 c5 1Adora Bell
hehehe, revenge is sweet, sweeter that all the caramel in the world, and in the end it makes you just as sick. I love it.
-Kat
hehehe, revenge is sweet, sweeter that all the caramel in the world, and in the end it makes you just as sick. I love it.
-Kat
11/18/2006 c5 Miken
Awe I loved this chappie! Alex finally got to talk to someone about her past and get it off her shoulders a bit, and I thought the scene with her punching Christian was hilarious. Keep it up!
Awe I loved this chappie! Alex finally got to talk to someone about her past and get it off her shoulders a bit, and I thought the scene with her punching Christian was hilarious. Keep it up!