for Misconception REWRITE11/17/2006 c1 Preethy
You live in Vancouver that is so cool because I live in Vancouver too. Well on to the story.. Alex's character is very interesting. I think that Alex is a very sarcastic person and is very much like someone I know.
You live in Vancouver that is so cool because I live in Vancouver too. Well on to the story.. Alex's character is very interesting. I think that Alex is a very sarcastic person and is very much like someone I know.
11/17/2006 c5 vidx
I really like the style of your writing. This story is coming along very nicely, I will be looking forward to more.
I really like the style of your writing. This story is coming along very nicely, I will be looking forward to more.
11/17/2006 c5 
7Rains
Hey, I like this story and I don't think the chapters are too short at all (Yeah, I don't know why I didn't skip the review replies. I guess I'm just nosy...and I don't want to miss any extra info) seen as you've been updating regularly. The bit about Christian sniffing up some of the blood made me laugh SO much and I just like your style of writing - I'm interested to see where this will go. :0)
7RainsHey, I like this story and I don't think the chapters are too short at all (Yeah, I don't know why I didn't skip the review replies. I guess I'm just nosy...and I don't want to miss any extra info) seen as you've been updating regularly. The bit about Christian sniffing up some of the blood made me laugh SO much and I just like your style of writing - I'm interested to see where this will go. :0)
11/16/2006 c4 fire0ice
quite a bit of this story seems very familar. hopefuly it was yours i read or you brought the rights.
quite a bit of this story seems very familar. hopefuly it was yours i read or you brought the rights.
11/15/2006 c4 angelic
hey good to see you updated again. the story is getting very interesting.
hey good to see you updated again. the story is getting very interesting.
11/15/2006 c4 1Adora Bell
Really not bad. Sorry I didn't review the other times, but I only returned after a reading break. Eagerly awaiting the next chappie.
-KAt
1Adora BellReally not bad. Sorry I didn't review the other times, but I only returned after a reading break. Eagerly awaiting the next chappie.
-KAt
11/15/2006 c4 17angels and effects
Very interesting story! It was funny how Christian's name got spelled as Christina, that Mz Krunkel's got an attitude problem. Come to think of it, Christian's got a slight one too. Sounds like he's in denial, which I'm guessing is going to be quite intriguing. Of course, there's always that fine line between hate and love so I supposed MAYBE something will happen between Alex and Christian. Well, what can I say, the cliched player and the girl who barged into him making out with a blonde bimbo... I'll like to see how the Jill thing pans out. Surely a lot of people will have something to say about a girl living in an all-boys' dorm. Though I'm a little surprised how the headmaster didn't hear of it... anyhow, Jordyn sounds like the real deal though; not many guys can see the inner beauty in the opposite sex, only the physical part. Alex can kick ass, I like that! Girls who are all girly are just too fake.
So Alex is shaping up to be a promising character. Christian needs a little more work though :D okay, so update soon, I'll really like to read more of this!
17angels and effectsVery interesting story! It was funny how Christian's name got spelled as Christina, that Mz Krunkel's got an attitude problem. Come to think of it, Christian's got a slight one too. Sounds like he's in denial, which I'm guessing is going to be quite intriguing. Of course, there's always that fine line between hate and love so I supposed MAYBE something will happen between Alex and Christian. Well, what can I say, the cliched player and the girl who barged into him making out with a blonde bimbo... I'll like to see how the Jill thing pans out. Surely a lot of people will have something to say about a girl living in an all-boys' dorm. Though I'm a little surprised how the headmaster didn't hear of it... anyhow, Jordyn sounds like the real deal though; not many guys can see the inner beauty in the opposite sex, only the physical part. Alex can kick ass, I like that! Girls who are all girly are just too fake.
So Alex is shaping up to be a promising character. Christian needs a little more work though :D okay, so update soon, I'll really like to read more of this!
11/15/2006 c4 ckshorty
VRBG sounds interesting. What a cliffhanger! Do update as soon as you can!
VRBG sounds interesting. What a cliffhanger! Do update as soon as you can!
11/15/2006 c3 ckshorty
Her brother is a little scary! Not sure what to think of Jordyn. Other than that, I liked the chapter :O)
Her brother is a little scary! Not sure what to think of Jordyn. Other than that, I liked the chapter :O)
11/15/2006 c2 ckshorty
:o) I'm liking this.
:o) I'm liking this.
11/15/2006 c4 Murphy's Lawyer
Good story, I've just read it. I really like it so far. Alex and Chris are both great characters. Now, since this was placed as a romance, I'm guessing it'll be a classic plot: Chris falls for Alex, Alex falls for Chris.
But that's just a guess. Sadly, I don't know what'll happen next. But by placing YOU on author alert and this story in my Favorites, I'm gonna find out or die in the attempt.
Okay that was dramatic. But I still want an update!
- LL
Good story, I've just read it. I really like it so far. Alex and Chris are both great characters. Now, since this was placed as a romance, I'm guessing it'll be a classic plot: Chris falls for Alex, Alex falls for Chris.
But that's just a guess. Sadly, I don't know what'll happen next. But by placing YOU on author alert and this story in my Favorites, I'm gonna find out or die in the attempt.
Okay that was dramatic. But I still want an update!
- LL