for Misconception REWRITE6/30/2007 c15 xi-love-you-x3
I love this story. i think that its well put together.
I love the idea of the VRBG.
I love this story. i think that its well put together.
I love the idea of the VRBG.
6/30/2007 c15 
3silvershadow23
aw...sweet! i love how alex kinda sorta seems to be developing feelings for Chris...no offense meant, but i don't really like Kaiden...don't know why...what happened to Jordyn (did i spell it right?) anywho, looking forward to more updates (this is becoming my reviewing motto lol)
silver
3silvershadow23aw...sweet! i love how alex kinda sorta seems to be developing feelings for Chris...no offense meant, but i don't really like Kaiden...don't know why...what happened to Jordyn (did i spell it right?) anywho, looking forward to more updates (this is becoming my reviewing motto lol)
silver
6/30/2007 c15 SuperCUTEJensen
great post...Alex and Chris are so cute..cant wait for more..hope you update soon
great post...Alex and Chris are so cute..cant wait for more..hope you update soon
6/30/2007 c15 frackandbonechick
aw so cute! Man i really can't wait until chris and alex get together, or at least when she breaks up with Kaiden. PLEASE CAN THAT HAPPEN SOON? hehehe i'm kinda begging here...lol
Can't wait until the next update
Cheers
Michelle
aw so cute! Man i really can't wait until chris and alex get together, or at least when she breaks up with Kaiden. PLEASE CAN THAT HAPPEN SOON? hehehe i'm kinda begging here...lol
Can't wait until the next update
Cheers
Michelle
6/30/2007 c15 6ObliviousLady
aww, that's so cute! Christian's so sweet. I wish he were my hero. Haha. Anyways, I'm very happy that you updated and I'd be even happier if you updated again.
6ObliviousLadyaww, that's so cute! Christian's so sweet. I wish he were my hero. Haha. Anyways, I'm very happy that you updated and I'd be even happier if you updated again.
6/29/2007 c15 inFEARandFAITH
I just want to let you know, I really appreciate your quick updates. I don't have to wait months for your story (which is spectacular by the way), it's just days.
I just want to let you know, I really appreciate your quick updates. I don't have to wait months for your story (which is spectacular by the way), it's just days.
6/28/2007 c14 atreyu love
haha, pink spandex? :]
lol, i wouldnt mind a pair
of pink leggins XD lol :) haha.
update! i love this story :D
haha, pink spandex? :]
lol, i wouldnt mind a pair
of pink leggins XD lol :) haha.
update! i love this story :D
6/28/2007 c14 19Olivine
At least they're getting along. I got a little confused by what was going on in the beginning, when Alexis was entering the game, but I did figure it out, so it was okay. The chapter was good, too, and if it weren't for Chris's pink spandex, I thought that after he said 'drop her,' he was going to go all out on them, and be all protective, and then things were going to get awkward, because he'd be uptight, and THAT would be too much drama. It still would be if that happened, and Alex was like 'my hero!' and it's a good thing that didn't happen, either. So thank Kori for uploading the pink spandex. Haha, so funny. How's your editing going?
Olivine.
19OlivineAt least they're getting along. I got a little confused by what was going on in the beginning, when Alexis was entering the game, but I did figure it out, so it was okay. The chapter was good, too, and if it weren't for Chris's pink spandex, I thought that after he said 'drop her,' he was going to go all out on them, and be all protective, and then things were going to get awkward, because he'd be uptight, and THAT would be too much drama. It still would be if that happened, and Alex was like 'my hero!' and it's a good thing that didn't happen, either. So thank Kori for uploading the pink spandex. Haha, so funny. How's your editing going?
Olivine.