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10/9/2007 c1 330in a jar pk
gorgeous imagery; i missed reading your work over the summer. x
2/14/2007 c1 1Eirama
I really liked this poem. I've reviewed your stuff before, but this one is probably my favorite of yours.

Eirama
12/17/2006 c1 36contrast and friction
I absolutely adore your style - it's just so harsh.. always so hard hitting. But at the same time, it always has an air of detachment, like you're watching from the side lines and screaming desperately before realizing you're on mute and your words have no real impact.. but you'll continue to bleed them anyway, just in case..

I guess that is what all poetry is.. heartache.. just in case

"We inject our selves with local anesthetic,

And lye crumbled and submissive just for a moment to cry a little, die just a little." and the bolded lines.. it's all just so much more beautiful than perfect. I don't know how to describe it.. But it's perfect.
12/2/2006 c1 77by His blood
ohfuck, this is BRILLIANT. ifuckingloveit. the format, the power of it, it's raw and it's perfect and oh my god, this is a favorite. i adore this.
11/28/2006 c1 ItMustBeLove
I love this ^ ^
11/8/2006 c1 65Aquafied
i am confused on the part of the lye

purposeful? i am supposing, but for what purpose?

and fuck

good old fuck, again, what?

anyhow. yeah.
11/8/2006 c1 200Maxwell K
thanks for the wonderful review! Awesome poem!

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