for Pride Cometh Before A Fall11/16/2006 c1 
4MisseSahib
Wow. I can see the Poe influence, but it is quite good anyway. the only thing I would reccomend is that you un-underline your vocab words. Other than that, it is rather good.
4MisseSahibWow. I can see the Poe influence, but it is quite good anyway. the only thing I would reccomend is that you un-underline your vocab words. Other than that, it is rather good.
11/7/2006 c1 93Alena D'Etoiles
Did you write this for school? What would appear to be vocab words have been underlined and I just wondered. Just saying.
93Alena D'EtoilesDid you write this for school? What would appear to be vocab words have been underlined and I just wondered. Just saying.