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16Cheeseraptor5
I really liked it, it's so true. The reapeating of lines at the end made it more like a song than a poem, but hey, it's your work, not mine. Nice work with this.
16Cheeseraptor5I really liked it, it's so true. The reapeating of lines at the end made it more like a song than a poem, but hey, it's your work, not mine. Nice work with this.