for Beautiful Black Raven12/27/2007 c1 
4A Free Elf
Hmm, this poem does seem a bit...well... pretentious. Maybe it's just too deep for me.
Nice imagery, apologies for the strange review.
4A Free ElfHmm, this poem does seem a bit...well... pretentious. Maybe it's just too deep for me.
Nice imagery, apologies for the strange review.
3/14/2007 c1 17life like whoa
The last stanza was very well written. Sums everything up very nicely. I like this way of looking at death, it's a nice perspective I haven't heard yet. Not cliche and overplayed like most "death" related poems.
17life like whoaThe last stanza was very well written. Sums everything up very nicely. I like this way of looking at death, it's a nice perspective I haven't heard yet. Not cliche and overplayed like most "death" related poems.