for Gray Insanity11/28/2007 c1 
4GrannyP
All the Japanese in there was very interesting to me, but I think that other people would probably just skip over it because it is a little difficult to read if they aren't familiar with other languages (or just don't want to take the time to try). This sounds like a very interesting start to your story, and I would be interested in finding out what happens next and why she has come to this school. Good job.
GrannyP
4GrannyPAll the Japanese in there was very interesting to me, but I think that other people would probably just skip over it because it is a little difficult to read if they aren't familiar with other languages (or just don't want to take the time to try). This sounds like a very interesting start to your story, and I would be interested in finding out what happens next and why she has come to this school. Good job.
GrannyP