for Limits, Lies and Pain10/6/2007 c1 
18sweetmalice
"Make sure you are what you Say." - Brilliant
"That was when I had a Heart." - Made me smirk, I thought of myself right there.
I love it actually. Its not really into rhytmic form, but all poetry isnt like that. I have trouble unrhythmically writing my poems, its a habit I need to shake.
Other than that, you should keep writing, its a refuge that I myself need to start doing again. I think I lost my touch, but Im trying to hop back on the banwagon before I lose my blossoming talent, and so should you.
Its a shame though that you deleted all your work, that is one of the biggest mistakes writers make. Make sure next time that you have it jotted down or saved somewhere. My best bet would be a USB drive. (Junkdrive). They cost like 20 bucks, depending on how much space you want.
Hey, I gotta go though, its flipping cold in this room :) hahah
18sweetmalice"Make sure you are what you Say." - Brilliant
"That was when I had a Heart." - Made me smirk, I thought of myself right there.
I love it actually. Its not really into rhytmic form, but all poetry isnt like that. I have trouble unrhythmically writing my poems, its a habit I need to shake.
Other than that, you should keep writing, its a refuge that I myself need to start doing again. I think I lost my touch, but Im trying to hop back on the banwagon before I lose my blossoming talent, and so should you.
Its a shame though that you deleted all your work, that is one of the biggest mistakes writers make. Make sure next time that you have it jotted down or saved somewhere. My best bet would be a USB drive. (Junkdrive). They cost like 20 bucks, depending on how much space you want.
Hey, I gotta go though, its flipping cold in this room :) hahah
9/28/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
This writing gets me thinking. The "you" you speak of making me think you are referring to a user. There is a lot of those out there in the world.
Good poem and good luck with writing and life.
Have a wonderful day. :)
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrThis writing gets me thinking. The "you" you speak of making me think you are referring to a user. There is a lot of those out there in the world.
Good poem and good luck with writing and life.
Have a wonderful day. :)
~Twilight Starr~