for In the Calm of Twilight10/24/2007 c1 
12Stormie Greye
The imagery in this is absolutely beautiful. I could picture the scenery vividly, and it's my favorite time of the day, or rather night. It's a peaceful time, and this poem was very relaxing.
As a little side note, I believe you made a small typo. Instead of "loose its luster," I think you meant "lose its luster."
It's hard to pick out my favorite lines, but if I had to, I would say they were the first five lines.
Wonderful job!
12Stormie GreyeThe imagery in this is absolutely beautiful. I could picture the scenery vividly, and it's my favorite time of the day, or rather night. It's a peaceful time, and this poem was very relaxing.
As a little side note, I believe you made a small typo. Instead of "loose its luster," I think you meant "lose its luster."
It's hard to pick out my favorite lines, but if I had to, I would say they were the first five lines.
Wonderful job!
11/12/2006 c1 7Atheneon
I like this piece. I love that moment of calm at night when nothing stirs. I especially love those moments when there is a full moon, and I can walk through the night in Luna's muted glory. One suggestion: I have always found the phrase "only moments ago" to be very akward in poetry and prose. It's kind of a distrating phrase. I've tried to use it before, but I gave up and wrote around it.
A very beautiful piece
7AtheneonI like this piece. I love that moment of calm at night when nothing stirs. I especially love those moments when there is a full moon, and I can walk through the night in Luna's muted glory. One suggestion: I have always found the phrase "only moments ago" to be very akward in poetry and prose. It's kind of a distrating phrase. I've tried to use it before, but I gave up and wrote around it.
A very beautiful piece
11/9/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Absolutely beautiful. I love the peaceful mood to this. Great flow too. I really like this piece a lot. Great work, keep writing, and thanks so much for your review.
Absolutely beautiful. I love the peaceful mood to this. Great flow too. I really like this piece a lot. Great work, keep writing, and thanks so much for your review.