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11/8/2006 c2 Stale.Cracker
Eeh...this needed a stronger finish. It was pretty good, but the ending was kind of ZAM done. You've got some real promise, but you need to keep the strength, the beat, the flow, and the pace. Maybe talk about how it was awkward at first when they got back together or something, but it needs to end stronger. But thanks for sharing it!

~Frodo
11/8/2006 c1 Stale.Cracker
OOH OOH OOH LEMME READ MORE NOWNOWNOW :O:O:O.

Haha, yeah, you could say that I really liked this n-n. Keep writing...I want to read more :D.

~Frodo

((please review back! :D))

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