for What Happened?11/9/2006 c1 
17Unique1952
Nice poem, it flows well making it better I think to read and though it's short, it has a lot of feeling behind it. I especially like the way this poem starts "And here we are now" saying that there was something before the bad. Again, I really like your work with this.
17Unique1952Nice poem, it flows well making it better I think to read and though it's short, it has a lot of feeling behind it. I especially like the way this poem starts "And here we are now" saying that there was something before the bad. Again, I really like your work with this.
11/9/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
This is nice. This piece flows quite well and the rhymes not bad, even if it is somewhat simplistic. But I suppose all things aren’t complicated, even if life makes it seem that way at times. My only suggestion for this piece is that you move it from the general poetry to the friendship poetry. It’s always best to put your poems in the most specific category possible; that way, it will appear before more readers who enjoy the particular subject. Keep up the good work!
This is nice. This piece flows quite well and the rhymes not bad, even if it is somewhat simplistic. But I suppose all things aren’t complicated, even if life makes it seem that way at times. My only suggestion for this piece is that you move it from the general poetry to the friendship poetry. It’s always best to put your poems in the most specific category possible; that way, it will appear before more readers who enjoy the particular subject. Keep up the good work!