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11/9/2006 c1 Orual
Quite a poignant piece, and it's sad that it's so realistic. You captured the thoughts and phrasings of a five-year-old very well. My only criticism is that a five-year-old probably wouldn't remember her father who died three years eariler. Excellent work, all around.

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