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755/16/2018 c36 Guest
WHAT HAPPENED TO AIKO ?Why did she leave ?
WHAT HAPPENED TO AIKO ?Why did she leave ?
9/23/2016 c54 Guest
You did a great job telling this sprawling story. I enjoyed it a lot. That being said, I feel like some of the instances and characters were a little too unrealistic. Specifically, when matt is saying horrible things about Jake and Sara and their kids. As a father and husband, I would have done everything in my power to destroy matt at that point, especially given the circumstances. Also, you used the same phrases a lot, like "eat a gun" for example. Great imagry, just try to change it up a bit. I bet if you fine tuned, you could turn this into a series of books or novellas or something and have a nice sized fan base. All in all, great fucking read, my friend!
You did a great job telling this sprawling story. I enjoyed it a lot. That being said, I feel like some of the instances and characters were a little too unrealistic. Specifically, when matt is saying horrible things about Jake and Sara and their kids. As a father and husband, I would have done everything in my power to destroy matt at that point, especially given the circumstances. Also, you used the same phrases a lot, like "eat a gun" for example. Great imagry, just try to change it up a bit. I bet if you fine tuned, you could turn this into a series of books or novellas or something and have a nice sized fan base. All in all, great fucking read, my friend!
4/25/2016 c1 Guest
Hi are you the gypsg_love in wattpad? You have the same story..
Hi are you the gypsg_love in wattpad? You have the same story..
4/2/2015 c54 Guest
great story
great story
2/13/2015 c52 Guest
Wait I'm confused. Why is matt back after so many chapters? Last chapter, it was him who was with addie... but I think you meant michael
Wait I'm confused. Why is matt back after so many chapters? Last chapter, it was him who was with addie... but I think you meant michael
1/12/2015 c54 Kenny Scott Halj
This is an awesome story. Please tell me where to find the rest of it. Really need closure! Thank you!
This is an awesome story. Please tell me where to find the rest of it. Really need closure! Thank you!
11/3/2014 c6 Unhippocampe
Truly enjoyable! I do have some feeling of horror reading you - and I look forward to read more of this story and others. Thanks a lot!
Only one thing: the likelihood of reaching the children just as they are about to be taken by the zombies. Some triggering event is lacking to explain why they are in jeopardy exactly at this moment. Maybe it could be something like: (a) the bus crew arrives and hesitate before the zombies; (b) the children get out to reach their parents, the grandparents try to help them and get eaten alive; (c) then the children are in peril.
In fact, another timing thing leaves me somewhat skeptical: the arrival of the bus crew just as the journalists get out of their building. Some more timing justification would make it better.
But it's good! I hope to read you again.
Truly enjoyable! I do have some feeling of horror reading you - and I look forward to read more of this story and others. Thanks a lot!
Only one thing: the likelihood of reaching the children just as they are about to be taken by the zombies. Some triggering event is lacking to explain why they are in jeopardy exactly at this moment. Maybe it could be something like: (a) the bus crew arrives and hesitate before the zombies; (b) the children get out to reach their parents, the grandparents try to help them and get eaten alive; (c) then the children are in peril.
In fact, another timing thing leaves me somewhat skeptical: the arrival of the bus crew just as the journalists get out of their building. Some more timing justification would make it better.
But it's good! I hope to read you again.
9/12/2014 c54 Guest
I love it! Great READ! can we get a part two to this? i want to know how things go with Addie!
I love it! Great READ! can we get a part two to this? i want to know how things go with Addie!
9/12/2014 c42 Guest
I am loving this story! It would have felt more "real" if you had described the charactors-what they looked like, personalities. You can visualize the story better that way.
I am loving this story! It would have felt more "real" if you had described the charactors-what they looked like, personalities. You can visualize the story better that way.
5/17/2014 c6 That Guy
Wait, Greg's dead.
And he's not Sara's husband.
Fix the typos, please!
Wait, Greg's dead.
And he's not Sara's husband.
Fix the typos, please!
12/3/2013 c53 Me
This was really good. However, the random Chinese or Japanese or whatever they were symbols REALLY made it harder to read. I definitely suggest you do something about them.
This was really good. However, the random Chinese or Japanese or whatever they were symbols REALLY made it harder to read. I definitely suggest you do something about them.
11/13/2013 c15 Darren
Brilliant writing, reminds me of stephan kings book the stand.
Brilliant writing, reminds me of stephan kings book the stand.
11/6/2013 c52 Huh
Why does it have random Chinese words in it?
Why does it have random Chinese words in it?