for I'll Die12/13/2006 c1 
22theysayshannon
this is really nice.
i think the arteries took away from the artistic form of this poem but i really like the message.
nice job! :]
22theysayshannonthis is really nice.
i think the arteries took away from the artistic form of this poem but i really like the message.
nice job! :]
11/14/2006 c1 16Noir Fleurir
i like this especially how the last line changed. it was really good and i see where you mentioned the emo stuff :)
16Noir Fleuriri like this especially how the last line changed. it was really good and i see where you mentioned the emo stuff :)
11/12/2006 c1 116createanarchy
it's really good, it isn't that emo at all, it's more thoughtful. I wanna meet the girl who it is i must admit
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116createanarchyit's really good, it isn't that emo at all, it's more thoughtful. I wanna meet the girl who it is i must admit
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11/10/2006 c1 25over-achieving-misfit
Indeed emo-istic, but whats a poem without emotion? Loved it, you (at least me) can really connect to how the girl feels. Fantastic.
-Alissa-
25over-achieving-misfitIndeed emo-istic, but whats a poem without emotion? Loved it, you (at least me) can really connect to how the girl feels. Fantastic.
-Alissa-