for River Dance11/16/2006 c1 
7Atheneon
Nicely done, I love river lore. There's just something about them that is magical!
One sugestion, the first line is off, with only four syllables. (this is against poets' ethics to make a bald-faced suggestion but here it is: change "sprites" to "spirits"-there I said it, i couldn't resist)
7AtheneonNicely done, I love river lore. There's just something about them that is magical!
One sugestion, the first line is off, with only four syllables. (this is against poets' ethics to make a bald-faced suggestion but here it is: change "sprites" to "spirits"-there I said it, i couldn't resist)