for Death in the Night11/10/2007 c1 
1DifferentWings
Why be troubled over something so well written? having a little lack of faith in the human race is something that goes over quite well for you!
Anyone who can write a good horror story has my kudos, because my frankly suck, when ever I get them posted that is lol
1DifferentWingsWhy be troubled over something so well written? having a little lack of faith in the human race is something that goes over quite well for you!
Anyone who can write a good horror story has my kudos, because my frankly suck, when ever I get them posted that is lol
1/26/2007 c1 495mate.feed.kill.repeat
It was a cool idea, but it lacks flow... the paragraphs describe everything perfectly but it's still pretty choppy.
Good work, though, it was a thriller. =]
-stixerz-
495mate.feed.kill.repeatIt was a cool idea, but it lacks flow... the paragraphs describe everything perfectly but it's still pretty choppy.
Good work, though, it was a thriller. =]
-stixerz-