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10/16/2007 c1 lookinthoughtthewindowonaSATUR
THIS IS LIKE THE BEST STORY EVER
1/15/2007 c1 14kit feral
Very well done!

"It’s a homeless man who’s the one That never gets lost" Brilliant line. I've never seen anyone look at it from this angle before, and it's a view I quite like. Very "not all who wander are lost" esque.

"Out of all the city, he’s the man with the very most nothing" I like the contridiction here. Most nothing- maybe everyone has too much and if they had less they could appriciate it more?

"The peace when you lose count of raindrops And snow." That's just a pretty line. :)

Great work! I really do like the ending. Very insightful.
12/19/2006 c1 22The Sweetest Oblivion
interesting and true. good job.

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